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lyrics that aren't quite finished....

I see you so far away
turning your face from the sky
into an abyss of your fears
the candle light you held so dear
now has winked out
by the falling of your tears.

I see you crying
Scratching out the words of your pain.
While blood stains the white walls
I heard you lying
Creating reasons for the hurt
While inside your torn apart

and you wont let me in.
but I'll wait right here, for you.


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I had an idea... and it went all to hell.... damnit.

I can't keep a good thing going anymore.
kinda like that frikken video... Covalence thought it was funny though.

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zahrah
Aug. 7th, 2001 10:15 am (UTC)
hey don't worry about it, same thing happens to me.

i write really good lyrics and by the time i get to the end i've fucked it up. the frusteration that boils is tremendous.

the problem here: we're both too hard on ourselves
joe_black
Aug. 8th, 2001 07:30 am (UTC)
Re:
:)

Maybe....

maybe....

So, tell me a good place to eat in the GB area. I'll be around next weekend. ;P
zahrah
Aug. 8th, 2001 05:42 pm (UTC)
a good place to eat in green bay? would be 'China Inn' on Onieda Street. it's a chinese buffet that's really good and a descent price. lori, my friends and i are completely addicted! for cheap food eat at the 'golden basket' on military. otherwise if you want fancy and money is no object then i'd say eat at 'black and tan' in depere. let me know where you go joe. lol, that rhymed.

joe_black
Aug. 9th, 2001 07:47 am (UTC)
Re:
Never heard of the Black and Tan....

China Inn will probably due... or... oh, wait, I haven't had anything from the Mayflower in a long time! That is another place where you get a lot of food for the price. (not buffet though)
lonelyaphrodite
Aug. 7th, 2001 01:53 pm (UTC)
good lyrics!

don't worry, somtimes its good to just give yourself a break and go back to it... it doesn't all have to come out at once! he he, remember when i was working on that song when i was talking to you?... i've been working on those words for weeks now, and they are still changing... its like having a baby, it takes some time for the words to grow and mature...

just take it slow...
joe_black
Aug. 8th, 2001 07:31 am (UTC)
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"having a baby"
isn't that more like, dialation... pushing... and stuff....?
lonelyaphrodite
Aug. 8th, 2001 01:49 pm (UTC)
he he, well yes, but i was refering more to the pregnancy itslef, or to the way a baby grows... lol, yea? maybe? guess not!

but then, sometimes it can seem like you're in labor... especially when you just can't get any of the ideas out...

or something... i dunno, i'm dumb! i think my step mom's blonde-ness is rubbing off on me, lol

ha ha, so what are you up to? anything fun and cool and the sort? sorry i don't have AIM or yahoo here, my dad's connection is like molasses, and plus, london is what... 8 hour time difference from CA? so i probably wouldn't see ya much anyway...

but i'm doing ok, and i hope you are too (busy as hell before your vacation, i'd imagine?!)... i'm leaving for paris tomorrow, but other then that, not much new...

lol, sorry that this ended up so long... guess i just had a lot to say... :-D
joe_black
Aug. 9th, 2001 07:45 am (UTC)
Re:
Not all that busy.

Just taking it as easy as I can with another final today.

Yesterdays went alright. I think I got a solid B in Art History.

As for Astronomy, I will know if I got an A or a B after taking the final later today.

Have fun in Paris!
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